Critique of Classmates

Computer Animation 3, Critiques

The Loss of a Wallet.

For my critique I chose to do “The Loss of a Wallet,” the pace project, by Sara Recktenwald. I thought this project was very well done but with minor mistakes. Some positives of this animation is the backdrop the animation is in giving it a ‘life-like’ feeling. The way Norman walks in the start of the animation is well done giving the feeling of what is going on in his mind and how he is being sneaky.

But some things that could have used some more work on included the head, as I believe it moves too much on the run back and needs to stay more stable. The fingers don’t move much and don’t give off much anticipation. And the pace back towards the door needs work as the arm stays backwards and has some joints that ‘pop.’

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